Draconus History Redone

I redid many aspects of the summary and it should make a lot more sense and it actually has an ending. As always, feedback is greatly appreciated.


The world of Draconus

Draconus is the smallest planet in a fictional galaxy. It is full of vegetation and consists of many different species of creatures. During the early history of Draconus, it mainly consisted of reptilian like creatures; after many centuries they evolved to become known as dragons and there was a huge war between the Draconians and the Dragons. The war first started when the Draconians decided to rid the planet of the “atrocities” due to their hostility, and the creation of wyrm monsters. The war lasted for over 50 years, but once a Wyrm Hunter known as Ninko Kirbus came around, it seemed like the war was going to end. After his success with killing many dragons, he was known for his selflessness and efficiency. He became one of the most renown wyrm hunters of all time. Ninko slayed most of the dragons, although most of them were young and were not at the peak of their strength. In the end, he prevented a dragon epidemic by nearly making them extinct. Years after these events, he himself was slain by a mere pack of Wyrm wolves due to his vulnerable age. His death was witnessed by his own family in the little town of Dragu on the eastern continent.

Nearly a decade later, Nero, Ninko's son, took his place to slay the remaining 8 dragons on the year of 300 ABP (After Birth of Planet) (Year 49 of the Dragon War). Over the next year, Nero created a group of elite Wyrm Hunters that resulted in the total annihilation of the Dragons. During the genocide, Nero and the group discovered many dark secrets; The dragons were actually not creating the wyrm monsters themselves. A mad scientist were taking the blood of the dragons and using it to mutate organisms in to blood thirsty beings. Not only that, but they ended up encountering people who call themselves Dragoons, and they worshipped the dragons. These dragoons were mutated with dragon blood and were made in to half dragon half Draconian abominations. Nero was appalled by these inhumane practices and rid of these psychologically troubled people... Near the end of the odyssey Nero looked as if he was regretting what he has been doing... But the party members took no heed in his troubles and trudged on. In the end, Nero and the group slayed the final dragon, but it cost Nero's life... From then on, Nero was known as the savior of Draconus, and was worshipped throughout the rest of its history...

The extinction of Dragons had many consequences. It ended up slowly killing the planet, as the dragons were actually the protectors of Draconus. Since their powers were no more, the planet ended up completely stopping and was left with two distinct sides of the planet. One side full of darkness, prevalent of life. The other side full of light, barren of life. The dark side of the planet has one of the biggest cities in all of Draconus, and that was the metropolis of Dorran. It was once a spiritual city full of peace, but years after the great change it caused it to flip. The city became one of the most dangerous yet populated cities in the entire planet, and the people started to panic due to the tremendous change of the planet.

Although, this was all about to change due to the strength of one shape shifter. This thing was named Kiman and he was the last Dorag; A nearly extinct race that could shape shift to whatever his brand is. Kiman's brand was of a wolf, and he used it well to hide his true self. He lived with a family in the barren lands away from Dorran, but one day a group of gangsters came and murdered the only people he loved... With his unstable emotions and what little clues he found, he head to Dorran. His plan was to purge the city once and for all, to slay all of the gangs no matter if they caused the malfeasance. As Kiman slowly purged each gang, he learned more about himself... Every gang leader was actually a part of Kiman's entirety, each being a facade of Kiman's true identity. Every time one fell, every time they were absorbed in to Kiman's body. Kiman exponentially became stronger with each death, and obtained a new form each time. Before he killed the 3rd gang leader, Kiman finally learned the complete truth. Kiman was actually not a Dorag, but merely a scientific experiment to annihilate an unknown entity recreating the Dragoons from the old manuscripts. The experiment ended up causing him to split in to three different personalities that each consisted and based around an emotion. The three forms escaped from the laboratory and the scientists thought all their work was for nothing. Kiman did not know what to think of this, and thought that was a complete lie. He took no heed to this and he became whole. He took flight to his final destination, the laboratory where he was actually created; the final gang leader's headquarters.

As he headed there, he encountered many abnormal organisms, they had the strength and speed of himself. He was able to defeat them, but he decided to take off the mask of the human like entity. When he took it off he realized something very peculiar of them, that these people had scaly skin and had deformed heads... The final part of him was right, he was created to destroy the Dragoons... The scientists took the old manuscripts and tried to recreate a Dorag, to be able to kill these abominations... He pushed on and killed all the Dragoons that stood between him and the supposed leader. When he finally reached the roof of the laboratory, he saw something very peculiar... He saw a medium sized dragon perched upon the roof. He finally realized his true purpose, to kill the final dragon inhabiting Draconus, and finally finish what Nero meant to do hundreds of years ago. After the fierce and grueling battle, Kiman comes out victorious and saved Draconus from ultimate annihilation.

Two years exactly after Kiman's great battle, the sun was no more. The planet fell to complete darkness and the true apocalypse began. The world became globalized and the entire planet was ruled by a corrupted official. Many resistance fighters have risen but due to all of the groups being disorganized, they could not achieve anything. Thus, a man named Claudius rose up. He was an unique man since he had an aura that seemed to resemble sunlight. People believed he was the true savior of Draconus; he ultimately unified the resistance forces. As Claudius and the resistance forces were able to retaliate, he was able to break through to the governments headquarters located in Dragu. The final battle between them seemed to be coming to a close. The resistance fighters seemed to have the upper hand, and Claudius decided to finally head to the emperor... As he went in to the throne room, he noticed something very abnormal; Claudius had dragon wings sprouting from his back and started to transform in to a dragon. The emperor laughed and told him he was actually no savior, but the bringer of the end of the world. He unveiled that he was one of the descendents of the Kirbus family, and that he was going to kill him and continue to rule over the world. Claudius could not believe this... He was supposed to be sent from Nero, he was supposed to save the world, he then thought... Am I really the avatar of death? All while he was thinking this, he had visions from the gods of old whom were forgotten after the purge. The explained to him he was actually one of the guardians of the planet, and that Draconus became too corrupted to save. All of the dragons during the history of Draconus were chosen by the old gods and were given an element to with hold, and that is how the planet started to slowly die... With Claudius' new motivation and new purpose, he gained the strength to attack the emperor. During the battle many quakes were happening and the planet seemed like it was exploding... Their battle was son throughout the entire galaxy... It occurred on many planes, the ground, sky, space, and the heavens. Ultimately, Claudius was victorious, and Draconus was no more...